Perfectly Flawed

The Real Poet on Feb 23, 2011

Perfect indeed.

i am a breathing billboard of flawed perfection, yet the minute i accepted Grace

i was made ‘perfect’ without exception

For the concept of hope is the eminent scope of salvation

So no matter corrupt the members of my body erupt

my soul is encased in an eternal vocation

my heart has to align with the sublime mind

and then in time my perfectly flawed perfection

will shed its’ flawed side and shine

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Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Feb 23, 2011
Nicely done. Superb meter and pace for this poem. As I often do when I really feel a poem I would like to point out that:

“For the concept of hope is the eminent scope of salvation”

Is an almost perfect line. So much so, that it seems almost like a poem within a poem. Poetic and quotable.

Good stuff brother!
Minister Marlene on Feb 23, 2011
Wow! This is a sure winner. What a musical poem with glorious meaning. Without question. It’s such a perfect poem. It has such style and holy grace. Praise the lord!

Hi there!