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Perhaps Maybe

amilia snow on Jun 19, 2009
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Perhaps…

Perhaps,

I have been thinking too much.

Perhaps,

I might have overreacted.

Perhaps,

I might even be confused between what’s dream & reality.

But, I stand by those thoughts of mine.

Perhaps,

it might seem useless to you to have these thoughts.

Yet,

I believe that it’s never wrong to worry about the one I have feelings for.

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  • Ruben Valentine on Jun 19, 2009

    lovely piece

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 19, 2009

    Oh ye, perhaps…nice piece. Liked it.

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 19, 2009

    I love the way you repeat ‘perhaps’ to reinforce your point. This is full of emotion, but you are right in what you say at the end, we always worry about those we love.

  • Martin McEnerney on Jun 19, 2009

    Very well written…I felt every word.

  • HeyZel on Jun 19, 2009

    Cool. Very nice. Especially this part: I believe that it’s never wrong to worry about the one I have feelings for.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 19, 2009

    well done,

  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 20, 2009

    Very lovely work – - soft & peaceful.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 5, 2009

    wonderfully written….

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 15, 2010

    perhaps ur right
    gr8888888 lovely

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