Permanent Good Night

KristinaM on Mar 29, 2009

Tags: death, dieing, Eyes, fighting, loosing, night, pain, struggling, water

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A poem about dieing.

Permanent Good Night

Eyes glazing over

Short gasps of air

Struggling

Fighting

Loosing

Body shakes

Salt water falls

Makes the wound sting

Bright colors die

Dull colors are born

One final gasp

A final flicker of light

Then darkness

The Permanent Good Night

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minnie wise on Mar 29, 2009
What I have just read makes my heart ache for I have seen this a lot over the last 26 years.I am a CNA.Very well written.
rutherfranc on Apr 2, 2009
sad, witnessed this too many a time in real life.. you described it as it perfectly..
rajeev bhargava on Jun 10, 2009
very descriptive and very well written!

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