A poem written with one another in Mind.

Thoughts fade in the sun
at the edge of the Earth,
and so begins my dialogue
with Self and Soul.

Quenching my mind by facing
A new direction-
To the west the waves speak to me
The sound of inner silence.
At peace with the ideas of taking my time.

Understanding the vision my world provides
In each moment aware of the beauty within.
Spinning a web to catch this creative side
Fueled by her warmth-
listening to nightly inspiration
we relax into consciousness-
a new perspective in mind.

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  • Mr Ghaz on Sep 11, 2009

    Wonderful!! Well done!..very attractive and unique poem..this was lovely and well presented too…I liked it!..Thanks for sharing this cool stuff..cheers

  • Mr Ghaz on Sep 11, 2009

    Excellent!! Well done!..A wonderful and lovely poem..I really enjoyed it! well presented too..Thanks for sharing this cool stuff..cheers

  • ken bultman on Sep 11, 2009

    Waiting to hear the second poem.

  • J.D.Isle on Sep 22, 2009

    It\’s not so easy to shift awareness. This poem has some insight to how our perspective creates our reality. Well written. I like: …Understanding the vision my world provides
    In each moment aware of the beauty within.
    Spinning a web to catch this creative side
    Fueled by her warmth-…

  • TroostAvenue on Dec 6, 2009

    Who is the ‘we’ of the last sentence. Have you been watching a beautiful sunset, warmed by the still warm earth? Leaves perhaps too much mystery for a short poem, but maybe the poem is bigger than it is long.

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