Another "idea poetry" submission.

Not sure what I was thinking when I wrote down the first few lines a few months ago, but I began writing the rest and this is the final product.

When we amplify our observations

And on the Petri dish of our imperfect thinking

Come to insane conclusions

It is all for the sake of argument; the same

Here we are as always never picking unfamiliar days

We choose again the mundane

Denying the journey’s importance

Seeking mystics to explain the uncanny portence

Or unfamiliar ways

When in the end it is all in vain

It is lost on the church of new thinkers

and those who make love to their own importance

and give full and carte blanche reign

To whatever tickles their ears

And even just for the moment allays their justified fears

©2010 J. K. Bradford

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  • PSingh1990 on Nov 7, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • lowellpendon on Nov 7, 2010

    I love the thought of if..

  • lapasan on Nov 7, 2010

    good post.

  • J M Lennox on Nov 7, 2010

    It is not the destination, but the journey, that is important. The future should be what we make it. Very nice…

  • awesome11 on Nov 7, 2010

    great share! thanks!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 8, 2010

    lowell and psingh, thank you fro commenting. I appreciate you and your time.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 8, 2010

    Ms. Lennox, thank you for weighing in from down under. Indeed, the journey almost always trumps the destination.

    Unless you have to relieve yourself and the destination is the toilet. :-) In which case you want the shortest journey possible and one without incident.

  • strategy03 on Nov 8, 2010

    This is very nice share

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 8, 2010

    When I saw the title it got me thinking. An article on Chemistry? Well am glad it wasn’t even though I am good in that line. Loved it.

  • lillyrose on Nov 8, 2010

    interesting write! we all wonder what the future will hold but must not hold our breath until it comes.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 8, 2010

    Thanks Leo, I am glad you enjoyed it.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 8, 2010

    Thanks Lilly.

    Although I know what the future holds for the most part.

  • T.S. Lewis on Nov 8, 2010

    Deep stuff, man.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 8, 2010

    Thanks for commenting T.S..

  • Kaye TM on Nov 9, 2010

    thanks for the share

  • LewSethics on Nov 10, 2010

    It is all for the sake of argument.
    That is what drives much of the contentious behaviour nowadays, the need to be right.

  • LadyElena on Nov 12, 2010

    Lovely read.

  • Adrn0919 on Nov 14, 2010

    “Those who make love to their own importance” yes, unfortunately there is a lot of that going around. Nicely said and written.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 19, 2010

    Yes indeed Sister Adrian. Yes indeed.

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