Oh, the snobbery of the uneducated.

Simple little children

so easily upset

deriving vengeful pleasure

off of someone they’ve not met

They hide behind their keyboard

and type their silly word

and all they did was anger

someone whose voice is heard

It seems so fully stupid

to attack when you don’t know

believing somehow you’re better

how much YOU need to grow

Lovely isn’t quite right

bitter is more on track

vengeful and ridiculous

and never had the knack

For doing this as eloquantly

as I have all these years

instead of being happy

you fill the world with tears

Oh tortured Honey

soul in pain

with bitterness and strife

why don’t you just admit it

your mad you’re not a wife

So live in quite solitude

for your spirit is contained

and all the things you think you feel

are wrapped in thoughts so stained.

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  • KimTherapist on Feb 15, 2011

    Dan, I believe this is your finest poem yet!

  • Wizard Brown on Feb 15, 2011

    I like it :)

  • lxdollarsxl on Feb 15, 2011

    jealousy is something that shows a very dark side, LH has crossed the path to this side and will no longer linger upon my doorstep.

  • lxdollarsxl on Feb 15, 2011

    come to think of it was your permission asked for your picture? i guess not and thats copyright theft.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 15, 2011

    Bus Ride Removed

    The bus ride,
    Has been removed
    As I missed you
    All your lovely comments,
    I thought you were annoyed.

    I have no Rolls Royce
    I only wanted
    To draw your attention,
    But I’m sorry
    For what has happened
    I sincerely regret
    My silly action

    I have been misunderstood
    Out- rightly,
    That’s why I lose friends
    Openly

    I can only say sorry.
    To the others
    I also apologise,
    I had no ill intention
    That’s no surprise.

    So to forget and give,
    I have only learnt,
    In the fire of Cancerous Ego,
    I have totally burnt.

    I hold you in high esteem
    Big papadan,
    I missed your comments
    But I have learnt my lesson
    I shall not enter another one.

    You are and always were
    A very good friend

    You have rightly
    Decried me openly,
    In your poetry,
    It deserves
    Of Lovely and Honey
    Surely

    Thanks Papadan,
    For your openheartedness,
    I shall never pass
    Your way again
    Hence

  • lowellhenderson on Feb 15, 2011

    Good job Big Guy.

  • PaulB on Feb 15, 2011

    There must be easier ways to get inspiration Dan. I missed the offending article so remain blissfully ignorant. Lucky me I guess. Hope your forthcoming poems are from a happier muse.

  • A Bromley on Feb 15, 2011

    Wow, this stirred up some comments. Good vent. Jealousy and envy make very poor bed partners. I think you got your point across.

  • Ukrainian on Feb 16, 2011

    Great poem, keep up!

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