Cold Kills.

File:Frostbitten hands.jpg

Waking in the morning,

the pain almost unbearable

my hands raw, swollen, blistered.

The night before, a blur;

drinking, walking home in the snow

cold that seemed relentless.

Cheyenne in winter

no place to be exposed;

a sour look from the medic.

Wrapping my hands in gauze,

unable to feel them any longer

the healed slowly.

The skin peeled painfully

layer by layer as it mended

until pink, tender new skin

appeared.

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  • Guy Hogan on Dec 7, 2010

    The photo made me cringe. But at the end of the poem his hands are healing and that made me feel much better.

  • bigpapadan on Dec 7, 2010

    Thank you for reading, sir.

  • lxdollarsxl on Dec 7, 2010

    ouch – remind me to wear gloves

  • bigpapadan on Dec 7, 2010

    I learned my lesson quickly.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Dec 8, 2010

    That must have been real painful.

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