Dreaming of a vampire.

 

 

You have an unquenchable thirst,

your flesh is cold to the touch.

You live in a world of darkness,

wandering this earth all alone.

You are a captive of the nighttime,

with an uncontrollable burning desire.

You need human blood to survive,

you must shun the bright sunlight.

You visit me while I am sleeping,

you are a phantom of my dreams.

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  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 22, 2009

    Keep the covers wrapped tight. I enjoyed it.

  • Linda Lori on Dec 22, 2009

    Nice!

  • Goodselfme on Dec 22, 2009

    So very well expressed by you.TX

  • alc on Dec 22, 2009

    You got me!!! I actually have similar dreams to this nightly! Are you the one that keeps getting in my head at night?? LOL Thanks for a great share!

  • ken bultman on Dec 22, 2009

    Keep the garlic handy.

  • ReggieLutz on Dec 22, 2009

    thanks for the read

  • diamondpoet on Dec 22, 2009

    Nice piece, well done.

  • Aiyanna on Dec 23, 2009

    Very well expressed!!!

  • Jane Jane on Dec 23, 2009

    wow, cool.

  • Geomorphosis on Dec 23, 2009

    :) ten Merry Christmas, Darla. Just my way of saying thanks and pls do not return the favor.

  • virtualredheart on Dec 23, 2009

    nice expression. i don’t want to dream a vampire but i wish i dream of an angel.

  • Starpisces on Dec 23, 2009

    nice but scary, especially that “you visit me while I am sleeping”,, I just imagine…no wonder Ken suggested to keep the garlic handy…
    LOL

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 23, 2009

    you scare me still

    but read you

    I will
    will.
    WILL
    WILL
    WILLLLLLLLLLLL

  • tonywriter on Dec 23, 2009

    Nicely and well expressed Thanks!

  • STEVE666 on Dec 23, 2009

    Scary!

  • Ask Cash on Dec 24, 2009

    gave me the shivers!

  • Melody SJAL on Dec 25, 2009

    Highly imaginative and descriptive. Merry Christmas!

  • ladydryle on Dec 26, 2009

    it’s kinda scary,but if the character of eduard collin will watch and visit me while i’m sleeping…It’s okay!!! hehe :)

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