Pickle Haiku

F J McCarthy on Jul 17, 2009

Tags: arts, forms, Haiku, literature, Poetry

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This was suggested by a fan of mine and I thought it would be really fun to try.

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Green fresh cucumber

Drowning in spiced vinegar

Reborn a pickle

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Comments (14)

Deep Blue on Jul 17, 2009
Well written. Got the veggie sting.
F J McCarthy on Jul 17, 2009
I would like to Thank My Fan Rep for inspiring this Haiku.
clay hurtubise on Jul 17, 2009
That will be a Vlassic, er, classic!
Thanks,
Clay
kate smedley on Jul 17, 2009
very funny FJ
sweetievee on Jul 17, 2009
mmm drowned cucumbers, reborn pickles! (clever) nom nom nom!
gaffneygirl on Jul 17, 2009
OMG, I can’t stop laughing.
Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 17, 2009
Ooooo! This is a good one!!
REPuckett on Jul 17, 2009
Just remember, a pickle will always be a pickle even if it were once a cucumber. lol
Daisy Peasblossom on Jul 17, 2009
All sorts of ways to take that one–good haiku.
BradONeill on Jul 17, 2009
Oh no! That is just wrong to send this to the hot content list! This site is broken. It has to be broken. Roflmao Way to stick to my buddy Repuckett! good thing he has a good sense of humor because the man is positively dangerous going by his photos!

im going to add a star for each attempt at posting *******
Ramalingam on Jul 17, 2009
Nice haiku
Juancav on Jul 18, 2009
Suggesting cucumber.Lol.
Pablina on Jul 18, 2009
no way! you’ve got a sense of humour. lol
Omniscient on Jul 18, 2009
Very funny. i liked it

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