Poem written about a combination of crazy but fun nights out remembering the good old days when life was free of social conformity the in-between childhood and adulthood and a place I wish I could have stayed forever.

three men with white hair wearing shades in the night,

The huge dog like a horse chasing them what a sight!

drinking tequila for the worm must be mine,

or black berries in brandy would do the trick fine,

spending ten hours sucking out corks,

 video taping us acting like dorks,

 me down on all fours with my skirt up my ass,

puking on policeman cuz i drank too much gas,

sleeping in tents in the strangest of places,

head spinning so fast you cant see peoples faces,

making snow angels when there isn’t any snow,

singing to trees and the stars all aglow,
spinning around spreading drink everywhere,

everyone wet but without any care

trying to mosh and ending up on the floor

covered in bruises but still wanting more


riding my bike dressed in my silk night gown,

id ran out of electric and i had to go town,

id break my ribs if i started to run,

crazy un-classy but oh so much fun,
laughing life loving so trusting and sure,

life wasnt so bad when i wasnt so pure, 

out in my garden dancing naked in the rain,

oh how id love to be that girl again !

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Comments (3)
  • peach42 on Aug 25, 2010

    you used amazing imagery. I felt like i was there as you made me feel young again .

  • Kerry-Ann Howitt on Sep 5, 2010

    Way to go babe! Absolutely loved it! xXx

  • AgronA on Dec 21, 2010

    lol none of it was imaginary :P

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