Pigtails N Orange Juice

yes me on Jul 30, 2010

Tags: last, Letters, odes, Poetry

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A wee run on pigtails n orange juice.

Siting here alpha or omega

Thinking back to you then

Would I recall my first tag

Chases in the winter time

I then married your pal

Your name is omega

…..

Just a little ditty for a long gone sweetheart.

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Comments (14)

Anuradha Ramkumar on Jul 31, 2010
Very nice.
PARAM on Jul 31, 2010
nice one matt……..keep going.
Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 31, 2010
Your wee runs have sugar in them nowadays Matt.
rajaryanme on Jul 31, 2010
Good lines.
drishti8 on Jul 31, 2010
Short but great piece.
Craigz on Jul 31, 2010
Like it
Atanacio on Jul 31, 2010
I loved it
Guy Hogan on Jul 31, 2010
We lose people but the memories remain.
mkd1788 on Jul 31, 2010
short and sweet poem…
Abhipray Sahoo on Jul 31, 2010
Niceee!
giftarist on Jul 31, 2010
I like this one, Matt. It reminds me of my friend.
LewSethics on Aug 1, 2010
good one, matt.
gaby7 on Aug 4, 2010
Married her Pal and not her? That must have been a truly lost sweetheart!
carissimi on Aug 5, 2010
did not see that ending coming… nice…

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