A wee run on pigtails n orange juice.

Siting here alpha or omega

Thinking back to you then

Would I recall my first tag

Chases in the winter time

I then married your pal

Your name is omega

…..

Just a little ditty for a long gone sweetheart.

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  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jul 31, 2010

    Very nice.

  • PARAM on Jul 31, 2010

    nice one matt……..keep going.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 31, 2010

    Your wee runs have sugar in them nowadays Matt.

  • rajaryanme on Jul 31, 2010

    Good lines.

  • drishti8 on Jul 31, 2010

    Short but great piece.

  • Craigz on Jul 31, 2010

    Like it

  • Atanacio on Jul 31, 2010

    I loved it :)

  • Guy Hogan on Jul 31, 2010

    We lose people but the memories remain.

  • mkd1788 on Jul 31, 2010

    short and sweet poem…

  • Abhipray Sahoo on Jul 31, 2010

    Niceee!

  • giftarist on Jul 31, 2010

    I like this one, Matt. It reminds me of my friend.

  • LewSethics on Aug 1, 2010

    good one, matt.

  • gaby7 on Aug 4, 2010

    Married her Pal and not her? That must have been a truly lost sweetheart!

  • carissimi on Aug 5, 2010

    did not see that ending coming… :) nice…

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