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diamondpoet on May 19, 2010

Tags: committment, love, Relationships

Love poem.

As he ran his fingers through my hair,

slightly tilted his head and gave me an intense stare.

It was at that moment, I knew I was loved.

When he took his lips and gently kissed me on the cheek,

I began to tremble, for his kisses made me weak.

I remember saying to myself, I am one fortunate woman.

Then he swept me off my feet and gently laid me down,

It was at that point I surrendered, then he turned my world upside-down.

Then with a slow sigh of relief, I knew that we were one.

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ageeinc on May 19, 2010
Another nice one. Your on a roll!
Anuradha Ramkumar on May 19, 2010
Very passionate.
Guy Hogan on May 19, 2010
This is a very pleasant romantic dream.
Jimmy Shilaho on May 19, 2010
God, you are in love Diamond and it shows in the latest poems. Keep it going for nothing beats that feeling. After reading this, I terribly need a hug!
Sourav on May 19, 2010
Very passionate indeed. Also very well expressed. Liked it!
Atanacio on May 19, 2010
a good write something familiar about it though maybe its the picture
diamondpoet on May 19, 2010
Thank you for viewing my work and for your comments.
ashan1614 on May 19, 2010
Very sweet and touching. It is very easy to surrender to the one that you know loves you.
LoveDoctor on May 19, 2010
Awesome poem. I love it. “As he ran his fingers through my hair.”

Then he swept me off my feet and gently laid me down,

It was at that point I surrendered, then he turned my world upside-down. I love these two lines. The reader can visualize every little detail.
flame007 on May 19, 2010
great write again! very heartfelt written with thought
Snooky on May 19, 2010
My my my! How you stir up the flames.
very lovely girlfriend
Christine Ramsay on May 19, 2010
A beautiful piece and so well expressed. I felt I was there.

Christine
giftarist on May 19, 2010
Witwiw, Like it!
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on May 19, 2010
Nice write.
neha80 on May 19, 2010
Interesting Piece.

Today I know more about it. Good subject selection for writing article.

Thanks for sharing good one.

Anjal….!!!
drishti8 on May 20, 2010
Nice poem. Very awesome photo added.
Starpisces on May 20, 2010
after reading, i feel myself floating in the air…. ..
Vikram Chhabra on May 21, 2010
A very beautiful and passionate piece. You take the reader to ecstatic sensual heights!!
Yvonne K on May 22, 2010
well done
CA Johnson on May 23, 2010
This is a beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Leafygreens on May 24, 2010
Tastefully said. Sweet and romantic. Thanks for sharing!
yes me on May 25, 2010
Love will do it all the T. CHEERS
jofices on Jun 17, 2010
It so romantic! Great Job!
annoneone on Jul 31, 2010
i was wondering if you were the one to also draw the illlustration.
very talented…
B.Beecansee on Oct 31, 2010
wonderful and impressive words..

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