Pimple

clay hurtubise on May 19, 2009

Tags: Acne, acne vulgaris, diarrhea, Gross, pimple, pimples, pop, Snot, Zit

Sitting, late at night, writer’s block… to much caffeine or not enough? What is that swelling on my forehead?

What is that feeling?

Ain’t it swell!

Pimple pimple,

Go to hell.

Squeeze it hard,

Squeeze it firm,

Squeeze it till,

You feel the burn.

‘Pop’, It’s gone.

Squeeze once more,

Remnants drawn,

Then they soar.

On my back?

Another pimple,

Give it a smack,

That was simple!

OMG,

Another one!

Like Alien pod!

I’m never done!

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Francois Hagnere on May 19, 2009
How terrible…
nenen on May 19, 2009
oh that really hurts… i hate pimples like that
Melody SJAL on May 19, 2009
Oh, that hurts so much, I guess. But I love how you expressed it. Nice piece.
CHAN LEE PENG on May 19, 2009
Yuck, this hurts! Well done piece again!
julianhw on May 19, 2009
Great one Clay! Pity I was eating raspberry yoghurt when I first saw the picture – put me right off
Karen Gross on May 19, 2009
Pimples like the one in the picture usually come from eating too much McKittens.
Sheila M on May 19, 2009
Oh I so wish I wasn’t eating when I saw that! Funny poem tho=)
Kate Smedley on May 19, 2009
Another one for the classroom!! Funny poem but ouch …
C Jordan on May 19, 2009
Fun poem Clay. Glad I spot-ted it.
Ruby Hawk on May 19, 2009
Oh my, I know that has to be painful. Loved the poem though.
Erin Lindgren on May 19, 2009
That picture is the most horrifying thing in the world.
But cuuute poem, in a gross and disturbing kind of way. :]
Mr Ghaz on May 20, 2009
Wow! ..that really painful..Lovely poem..well illustrate..LOV it
revivor on May 20, 2009
yuuuuuk!! apart from the poem – that was great!!
thanks – revivor
Bullwinkle Muse on May 20, 2009
You must be studying at the DuffMoss School of Literature. LOL Dang, that is one huuuuge pimple in that pic. It looks like something out of “Alien”.
Lostash on May 20, 2009
Was that thing on you at some stage??? What a sight, and what a read!
Duff D Moss on May 21, 2009
This is one to go up there with snot. My lord that freaking picture – repulsed but have a freaking uncontrollable urge to squeeze the bloody thing.
swatilohani on May 22, 2009
awesome tips, thnx for sharing
Susan B Anna on May 27, 2009
That pic was incredible, and like Duff I too although grossed out wanted to squeeze the thing away. Wonderful poem to go with it though, thank you for being so creative…
rizzei on May 31, 2009
is that a real pimple in the pic? if not, nice editing. It was good but sucks! nice poem:)
Inna Tysoe on Jun 4, 2009
Probably best to let it be. Otherwise yo never will be done with them!

Inna
PIMPLE POPPER on Jul 23, 2009
POP THAT THING!!! Then treat it if it were a handgun wound…withought the bullet…usa cloths and aplly preasure!
john tally on Dec 9, 2009
It’s a boil. Best not squeezed. Better if the skin pulled taut on either side of it to expel the pus and, hopefully, the core. Most best if lanced by a doctor.

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