Pining Pain

Sangeeta Chaudhary on Oct 5, 2010

The poem is about pain.

I felt his pain in my eyes

When he groaned and sighed

of traumas that long survived

Profound, intense, and deep his moaning

Left his dear ones groaning.

Heart rendering silent cries moved everyone

Ghastly grip widened the gap surd

Surreal suffering turned circumstances absurd

Wistful he becomes a solitude pining

Thriving for the fantasy world declining.

Sangeeta Chaudhary

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RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Oct 5, 2010
a really intense and beautifully expresse poem about pain. i was completely engrossed while reading it. thanks for sharing, sangeeta.
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Oct 5, 2010
that was a really well expressed and intense poem on pain. i was completely captivated by it. thanks very much, sangeeta, for creating and sharing it.
zulfiqarali5 on Oct 5, 2010
Thanks for share . nice piece of work !
Dragoonk on Oct 5, 2010
Very deep poem..
CC23 on Oct 5, 2010
very well described. =)
Tattoo3658we on Oct 5, 2010
This is a great read
GodsGrace on Oct 6, 2010
Nice Poem
Vivek Ratan on Oct 6, 2010
You are not here

Good nothing appears

When you don’t talk

Talk to me my tears

Pathetic and profound poem,Sangeeta

I felt his pain in my eyes too.
kiran8 on Oct 6, 2010
Very nice….
nikhilbux on Oct 6, 2010
hi,nice poem.To whom you dedicate this?
shivedi on Oct 6, 2010
Nice Share I Like It
Anj M on Oct 6, 2010
Wonderful
Sangeeta Chaudhary on Oct 6, 2010
Nikhil its about one of the collegues who is waiting to be blessed with baby even after 9 years of his marriage.
Mohd Huzaifa on Oct 12, 2010
NICE POEM, I CAN FEEL THE PAIN WHILE READING…may GOD help all those suffering with pain…

Hi there!