Pitter Patter

Lady Sunshine on Jan 24, 2010

Tags: Cleansing, Pitter Patter, Quenching, raindrops, soul, Spirit

Purify my soul…

Pitter…
            Patter…
                         Pitter…
                                     Pat…
Raindrops
                fall
                     upon
                             my
                                  face…
Cleansing
                my
                     soul…
Quenching
                 my
                      spirit…
Setting
           me
                free…

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ken bultman on Jan 24, 2010
Refreshing….cleverly composed…original.
Kris Tagre on Jan 24, 2010
This is wonderful..i really feel your poem.. (”,)
bailieman on Jan 24, 2010
I enjoyed this poem, nicely done.
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 24, 2010
u love flying kites and build ladders pitter patter goes my heart hoping to see ur comment on top alas gr888888 CREATIVITY U HAVE

SUN ALWAYS SHINES AND IT MAY ON U FOR EVER
LH
GWitt on Jan 24, 2010
very creative. I enjoyed it.
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 24, 2010
Yes in deed Lady Sunshine, quenching our spirits and setting us all free as once again you fill my heart with glee. You certainly have a natural ability of pulling your readers into you Lady. Wonderful Poem…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
Shirley Shuler on Jan 24, 2010
Hi Lady Sunshine, lovely and very refreshing. Love the picture!
Linda Lori on Jan 25, 2010
Delightful!
giftarist on Jan 25, 2010
Wonderful milady.
AlmaG on Jan 25, 2010
The beauty of the rain. Wonderful poem LS.
mkd1788 on Jan 25, 2010
nice pic you have uploaded..
papaleng on Jan 25, 2010
cute and delightful, nicely written with new writing approach.
Atanacio on Jan 25, 2010
This was so well done
Christine Ramsay on Jan 25, 2010
A very cute and distinctive poem. Well done.

Christine
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Marie Antoinette on Jan 25, 2010
Cute and very original, different.
VTech on Jan 25, 2010
NICE POST, THANKS FOR SHARING.
Val Mills on Jan 26, 2010
So simple, so beautiful
T. S. Lewis on Jan 26, 2010
Great penned thoughts. I liked the structure of it
deep blue on Jan 27, 2010
Very well expressed. The cleansing effect of rain.
standingproud on Mar 9, 2010
I love the words
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