Limerick.

His funeral flowers well spread
His wife oh such tears she did shed
As she marked the date
When he met his fate
They heard him say wait I’m not dead

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  • LoveDoctor on Apr 16, 2011

    Very nice work. I like the second line because it conveys emotion.

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 16, 2011

    To think of death makes me feel lonely

  • UncleSammy on Apr 16, 2011

    Nice Share

  • researchanalyst on Apr 16, 2011

    Great writing, something for all to think about

  • Stable on Apr 16, 2011

    Loved the end line – nice limerick Martin!

  • Ima Vee on Apr 16, 2011

    nice one… you got me with the last line… made me smile…

  • observer1 on Apr 16, 2011

    Hello new friend, enjoyed it once I got past the coffin!

  • FX777222999 on Apr 16, 2011

    Good limerick poem.

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