Your theme still mystifies me, but your Bruce Springsteen references are pretty cool. They are old tunes and maybe it was unconscious, but your gift is truly wonderous as I try an put these pieces together to a mysterious puzzle. Creatively dazzling.

There are no complications in this writing; the language is straightforward, and the message, though it could have told more, is clear.

By the way, check my stuff on the site; I`ll be more than glad if you do.

Bruce who? Jumpstone?

There is definitely something of the night about you.

Oh wow, most interesting indeed dude!

RT
http://www.anonymouse.net.tc

Hey Jimmy! How are you?

very interesting piece

I enjoyed this very much. Good Job.

Interesting poem. Ek hou van die pad teken. Why would one have ’sea cows’ crossing a road

*cocks head to the side* Interesting…..

Very odd?

lol

Mysterious indeed. Liked it too.

impressively crazy; I like it.

great work!

stabbing! i kinda got lost in the middle, went back and read it again.
i loved the title, and hey could have done bettr with some xpansion of the storyline

And is that an obsession for the dark force? Is your future envisionment for the world like star trek or star wars? Just thought I would ask.

Interesting piece

Fun – and wierd! But a good wierd. Enjoyed it!