Written about living with a man who does not know how to make me feel loved.

Romance is what I crave, I cant seem to find it now
Once upon a time, it was always there with a bow.
Hugs, and kisses are what I want, even as you lay by my side,
your computer has your interest held so tight, even when I cried.
Please dear wont you look at me and talk to me this day,
or else to someones elses arms is where I will begin to lay.

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  • Morgana on Nov 23, 2008

    Yes indeed, take care of what’s yours or you might lose it to another.

  • R J Grant on Nov 23, 2008

    What are some people thinking?

    Grant

  • goodselfme on Nov 23, 2008

    What a powerful message in this flowing piece, my friend.

  • Debra. on Nov 23, 2008

    Be kind to the one you love. Cherish them with all you’re heart. God bless, linda. Your loyal fan, DEB

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Nov 23, 2008

    Interesting, at times computers can bring people together and other times keep them apart.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 23, 2008

    I feel for you Lindalu. Its so hard when you are ignored by a loved one. Keep in there

    Christine

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Nov 23, 2008

    what a nice way to express a feeling,

  • Inna Tysoe on Nov 23, 2008

    Yes–we all need attention.

    Inna

  • Lauren Axelrod on Nov 23, 2008

    I feel your heart with this one and I can relate right now.

  • IspellBad on Nov 23, 2008

    This is strange. don’t have an answer!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 23, 2008

    Better tell him what you feel. People can get so caught up in work they lock everything out and sometimes it s the tension from a heavy work load. take care, Ruby

  • joystick7 on Nov 24, 2008

    Lovely!

  • Melody SJAL on Nov 24, 2008

    Sooo filled with emotions. God bless.

  • James DeVere on Nov 24, 2008

    “All men are btasrads,” or haven’t you heard?

  • ayaBee on Nov 24, 2008

    very honest.. i like it..
    ^___^

  • Geri on Nov 24, 2008

    Good write Linda Take care

  • johnny yuma on Nov 24, 2008

    Be sure you tell the man how you feel before going anywhere. He may not realize that he is neglecting you. I know that I sometimes get caught up in what I am doing and forget to tell my wife how much I love her–fortunately for me she always reminds me in someway or another. I try to remember that even though she isn\’t often the inspiration for my writing unless it is a love poem. I still love only her and give her the attention that she needs, because we both need attention–it isn\’t a one way street.

    Good writing my friend!
    Damon/johnny yuma

  • CA Johnson on Nov 24, 2008

    You did a great job. I enjoyed reading the poem.

  • Loafer on Nov 24, 2008

    An honest, straight-from-the-heart poem, I like it.

    Loafer

  • Johaubannah on Nov 24, 2008

    It’s a nice one. Great job.

  • Will Gray on Nov 25, 2008

    So much emotion, it made me sad.

  • Tony Downing on Nov 26, 2008

    “Danger, Will Robinson!”… Forgive me L, that was a warning sign tho, and very well said because it came from your heart and was heard just so… I hope all is well and I write this from someone I know had the same problem. If one can get their butt off the PC long enough, or maybe share the interest – there’s always a solution, yes? My best to you ~T

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Dec 1, 2008

    A very emotional piece with a very powerful message. I wish you my best.

    -M

  • 1Mind on Dec 16, 2008

    It always saddens me when I see someone in a one-sided relationship. We give so much of ourselves to relate to others, and when the favor isn’t returned, it hurts. My heart goes out to you. May the Lord give you strength in this difficult time.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jan 6, 2009

    very good

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