Comments on: Please

By: Milton H Peebles III

Milton H Peebles III — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 21:42:41 +0000

very good

By: 1Mind

1Mind — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 22:46:20 +0000

It always saddens me when I see someone in a one-sided relationship. We give so much of ourselves to relate to others, and when the favor isn’t returned, it hurts. My heart goes out to you. May the Lord give you strength in this difficult time.

By: Michele Cameron Drew

Michele Cameron Drew — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 10:53:33 +0000

A very emotional piece with a very powerful message. I wish you my best.

-M

By: Tony Downing

Tony Downing — Wed, 26 Nov 2008 12:57:13 +0000

“Danger, Will Robinson!”… Forgive me L, that was a warning sign tho, and very well said because it came from your heart and was heard just so… I hope all is well and I write this from someone I know had the same problem. If one can get their butt off the PC long enough, or maybe share the interest – there’s always a solution, yes? My best to you ~T

By: Will Gray

Will Gray — Tue, 25 Nov 2008 17:44:50 +0000

So much emotion, it made me sad.

By: Johaubannah

Johaubannah — Tue, 25 Nov 2008 04:15:27 +0000

It’s a nice one. Great job.

By: Loafer

Loafer — Tue, 25 Nov 2008 01:09:23 +0000

An honest, straight-from-the-heart poem, I like it.

Loafer

By: CA Johnson

CA Johnson — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 23:32:51 +0000

You did a great job. I enjoyed reading the poem.

By: johnny yuma

johnny yuma — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 22:58:32 +0000

Be sure you tell the man how you feel before going anywhere. He may not realize that he is neglecting you. I know that I sometimes get caught up in what I am doing and forget to tell my wife how much I love her–fortunately for me she always reminds me in someway or another. I try to remember that even though she isn\’t often the inspiration for my writing unless it is a love poem. I still love only her and give her the attention that she needs, because we both need attention–it isn\’t a one way street.

Good writing my friend!
Damon/johnny yuma

By: Geri

Geri — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 16:48:04 +0000

Good write Linda Take care