Please baby, comeback…
I wanna be with you.

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Can’t stop thinking
Can’t hide this feeling
Looking back from the days that passed,
Remembering the scent of the grass
As I turn back to our sweet memories,
I remember us eating fresh fruits and berries
Smiling and staring at each others eyes,
Our love story was real without any lies.

I still remember when you said to me
While we were sitting close to the sea,
“Baby, I can no longer stay,
I must go with my family someday!”

As I heard those lonely words you’ve spoken
From my eyes of blue, tears had fallen
But I should enjoy the last days that you are here
So we could collect more happy memories, my dear
Soon came the day of your departure
The start of your new adventure.
I wish we could never forget each other
Especially the memories we shared together.

All the days that you were gone,
Thinking of you is all I’ve ever done
Crying whenever my mind is blank,
Walking alone near the riverbank.

And now, it’s been 3 years
Spending all of it’s days filled with tears.
The reason I wrote this poem for you,
Hoping you had a chance to read it too
Please baby, comeback…
I wanna be with you.

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  • Tarra Buluran on Mar 18, 2009

    Oh, my! The picture speaks of profound sentimentality and so the words. I like this poem!

  • rajeev bhargava on Mar 18, 2009

    a really beautiful poem, very well expressed and saturated with the pain of missing a loved one. even a few seconds away from a loved one can make anyone so lonely, but 3 years is self-explanatory. i really pray he reads this and comes back into your life and responds to your love as fast as possible.

  • Dee Gold on Mar 18, 2009

    a nice piece with an attractive picture,too

  • Betty Carew on Mar 18, 2009

    Written so beautifully painful, a poem that surely shows a longing for a loved one. Lovely Cutest

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 18, 2009

    A very emotional poem. It does hurt to be away from a loved ones, especially for years.

  • nutuba on Mar 18, 2009

    CP, this is so romantic and beautifully written.

  • Andrew Davies on Mar 18, 2009

    :}

  • Sean on Mar 18, 2009

    Very deep, I like it a lot

  • barbie67013 on Mar 18, 2009

    Great poem princess. The longing and desire that you have given it makes it just feel soooo bad. But I think it is a wonderful expression of feelings. Great! Good Job!

  • rutherfranc on Mar 18, 2009

    heartbreaking sentiment.. hope you get him back..

  • papaleng on Mar 18, 2009

    a very heartfelt one. don’t worry there is light at the end of a tunnel.

  • OhSugar on Mar 18, 2009

    Sorrowfully romantic poem. Love hurts when someone leaves and may not return.

  • Juancav on Mar 18, 2009

    Meaning poem, a modern Penelope

  • gianne on Mar 18, 2009

    Romantic and so heartfelt…

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 18, 2009

    The sense of yearning is so strong, lovely poem.

  • lindalulu on Mar 18, 2009

    So romantic and filled with great feelings and memories!

  • LStacy on Mar 18, 2009

    I loved it. Very romantic.

  • Mrs M on Mar 18, 2009

    Loved it!!!! You picked a nice pic to go with it too!

  • V Frost on Mar 18, 2009

    Beautiful, and sweet expression.

  • luvbnarmywife on Mar 18, 2009

    liked it…alot. I know the feeling of missing someone for that long

  • Ramalingam on Mar 18, 2009

    I can understand your longing for your love.I wish she returns to you as soon as possible.

  • William Rodriguez II on Mar 19, 2009

    Very romantic.

  • Radhika on Mar 19, 2009

    Very Romantic and deep

  • mizterman on Mar 19, 2009

    As the tears began to roll down my face. I can say this touch me in that deep place. The words can’t express the love I feel from reading your distress. This was a great poem. God bless

  • dhezamarie on Mar 19, 2009

    i remember my high school love with this poem. good one.

  • TOPELECTRICIAN on Mar 19, 2009

    WOW! NOW THAT WAS ROMANTIC! POETRY AT IT’S BEST! GOOD JOB CP.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Mar 19, 2009

    You’re a good poet too! Claps for you!!

  • nightcharmer on Mar 19, 2009

    What a sincere and heartfelt piece! There’s a longingness in the tone. Very apt and expressive. The title kinda reminded me of the song “Baby Come Back” though. Have you watched Transformers? It was one of the soundtracks. Haha. Anyway, great job! :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 19, 2009

    You are such a lovely Princess,
    How dare he do that to you?
    Tell me where is he,
    I shall help you,
    As I am at times in New York,
    I’ll catch hold of him,
    And make sure,
    You no more dream of him.

    He must bend and relent,
    And ensure that he continues,
    To love you all the more

    But if he is just another one,
    Out like any other boy for sexy fun,
    I would leave him,
    I if I were you,
    For I can see your love,
    Is though one sided yet true,
    Perhaps that guy,
    Does not deserve you
    lh

  • Rookie Expert on Mar 20, 2009

    Aah! Lovely lonely love…my husband is in another city. We have been meeting over weekends, I miss him terribly over the weekdays! So I LOVED the poem.

  • Street Smart on Mar 20, 2009

    3 years is a very long time. Your lonelyness and love reflects in your words. Good one!

  • stephencardiff on Mar 20, 2009

    nice work princess I enjoyed reading this…

  • Unofre Pili on Mar 21, 2009

    That’s pretty heartfelt. This is one of the horrors of life that one should take stoically in order to avoid the full agony of sufferings. Nicely written friend.

  • writergirl77 on Mar 27, 2009

    What a beautiful poem!! I loved it!

  • MrZebra84 on Mar 28, 2009

    Very passionate and well written, nice work!! you really distill your longing quite well.

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