Please Come Back..

girishpuri on Oct 18, 2011

Tags: come back, forgive, love, rose

Tell me how I am suppose to live without you….

You are so loving and so charming

you are always smiling and full of life

You are a motivation to me

You are an inspiration to me

You make my world so beautiful

You are the purpose for me to live

You are just like a beautiful rose

When ever you speak

It is like a sweet song to me.

You love me from the core of your heart

When i come back from office

You hug me and that is so warm

That i forget all my pains

You never complained me

You never demanded anything

Than what went wrong ?

Why you left me ?

I am also a human being

Every human being is full of errors

I agree i did many mistakes

I always took you for granted

I always thought you are only mine

I could never see you talking to some other male

I may be a person who is narrow minded

I am a person having so many weaknesses

So what ?

Every particle of my body loves you , admires you

I am like a hollow cylinder without you

I can’t live without you

You are my life

You make my day

please come back

i promise you

i will change myself

i would try to rectify my mistakes.

You can talk to any one

You can smile with every one

I will never object

Please come back

please come back

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Comments (32)

Sunjhini on Oct 18, 2011
beautifully expressed. wonderful write
Elle64 on Oct 18, 2011
I hope the persons come back-nicely written
Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 18, 2011
I pray taht person should b with u sooon.
FX777222999 on Oct 18, 2011
Nice way of expressing yourself through an article, but, in real life, talk to him personally. Be firm and decisive.
mdrkarim7 on Oct 18, 2011
Nice post, and keep patience pal!
foxpete88 on Oct 18, 2011
very nice…thanks
thelyricwriter on Oct 18, 2011
voted liked. such a wonderful poem. i really enjoyed it.
AmateurWriter on Oct 18, 2011
niceeee..i like it
socialbookstatus on Oct 18, 2011
Very nice!
Lynn Hollis on Oct 18, 2011
Nicely written, full of emotion.
binyumanyun on Oct 18, 2011
Nice share..
yes me on Oct 18, 2011
Nice lines here cheers
girishpuri on Oct 19, 2011
thanks all
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
Wonderfully written….enjoyed reading….very moving poem .
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
Wonderfully written….very moving poem .
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
Wonderfully written..very moving poem .
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
Wonderfully written , very moving poem .
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
Very wel written….moving poem . Thanks !
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
Very wel written….moving poem . Thanks !
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
Very well written….moving poem . Thanks !
Edumate on Oct 19, 2011
I am so sorry , don’t know why my comment was posted so many times…although it showed error in posting comment initially
Socorro Lawas on Oct 20, 2011
well-articulated feeling.
papaleng on Oct 20, 2011
heartfelt .
ittech on Oct 23, 2011
very nice
girishpuri on Oct 23, 2011
thanks to all
Raj the Tora on Oct 27, 2011
Loved it, very touching and excellent.
Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 28, 2011
Beautiful!
Bruce Officer on Oct 28, 2011
Starts so upbeat and then becomes sad as the true circumstances are revealed. Very moving.
Kristie Claar on Nov 4, 2011
wonderful words
gaby7 on Nov 20, 2011
A truly wonderful person that friend is!
girishpuri on Nov 21, 2011
thanks
Safa on Apr 28, 2012
I love your love poems

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