Plummeting

R G Lowry on Oct 20, 2009

Tags: blood, dancing, falling, nauseous, plummeting, pounding, pushed, Rush, sick

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Words can send you plummeting into depression.

My heart is plummeting

the rush of blood is making me sick

I feel nauseous and my head is pounding

your wicked words are dancing around

they are mocking me over and over

You have pushed me and I am falling

this is what it feels like to be plummeting

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Aleena on Oct 20, 2009
Great poem. I don’t have the same kind of reaction, I normally just get mad. As long as I can get it out after I’m good.
willie wondka on Oct 20, 2009
poor you, i hope you are feeling better, like the poem.

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