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Poem: Hopelessly Devoted

ssaunders on Nov 16, 2009
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Twenty-six more days left until he will be here!

I’m hopelessly devoted to you!

devoted to you!

devoted as the days go by

they stream right 

along

Twenty-six more days

to go by

I’m hopelessly devoted to you!

devoted to you!

devoted to 

my sweet,

my sugar,

my everything!

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  • ceegirl on Nov 16, 2009

    nice poem

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 16, 2009

    Lovely poem..

  • Themax on Nov 17, 2009

    you are so excited ha ha!! very nice poem ,Thanks :)

  • jimbob1 on Nov 17, 2009

    So Miss S…the countdown continues…are we going to find out where he is coming from. Will be following the daily countdown and hoping for the best for you.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 18, 2009

    You are able to put real emotion into your work..

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 21, 2009

    how lucky is he

    who will get thee

    a lovely devoted wife will ye be

    i love thee
    i love thee
    I LOVE THEE

    my child may

    the Lord

    BLESS THEE

    UR FRIEND

    LOVELY

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