Poem: How My Heart Crumbles

ssaunders on Dec 7, 2009

Tags: dislike, hatred, pain, Pandora

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I despise her so.

In the words that are said are the feelings that have been spread

in pain many will say for the heart crumbles in time

for the life we hold takes us on a wild ride of joy and pain

because the people we despise wont just go away with the blink of an eye

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Comments (9)

ceegirl on Dec 7, 2009
I know how you feel.
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 7, 2009
simple short and sweet

keep it up

but let not ur heart crmble yet

there are miles to go

beyond the beyond
Adam Qualmann on Dec 7, 2009
When the time comes and the hart crumbles, it allows you to build a better, stronger hart. For example. when a storm comes and rips the house down that you have just built, the friends and family come to your aid. Then a house it built that will withstand the storm that may come again.

In short, when the hart crumbles, the relationships you have grow stronger and the hart gets put back together strong as well. Just learn from the mistakes you have made and the mistake wont happen again.

Don’t give up just yet!
loveableseth on Dec 8, 2009
Great poem but keep your head up everything will get better.
jimbob1 on Dec 9, 2009
S…sounds like some bitterness after a posible hurt…Amazed that you were able to sum up those deep feelings and emotions in such a short poem…
Dame Barbara on Dec 10, 2009
So true, so true!
Geomorphosis on Dec 10, 2009
Very nice yet so sad.
qasimdharamsy on Dec 14, 2009
Very nice…
mkd1788 on Dec 22, 2009
nicely expressed…u will feel free by sharing yours feelings..

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