This was a song that I didn’t finish so I turned it into a poem and decided to share it with you all.

Hope you Enjoy and leave comments!

Opened up your thoughts

 Cracked codes to your law of pleasure..

Unlocked what I’ve found

 Within you lies all of these treasures..

Mind and soul

That’s what I want to get to know..

I do not want to control

Only hold and console..

Your words to my ear

Tell me to have no fear..

So you spoke and I cared but when I speak you don’t hear..

Thought you cared but you don’t

And my thoughts tell me you won’t..

So I’m gone but I care

Still waiting for you to hear..

*This was originally a snippet of  a song that I wrote but I decided to turn it into a poem. I hope that you all do enjoy and be sure #VYO. 

Thank you for reading and (Voice Your Opinion)

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  • V rank on Jun 16, 2011

    Charming piece…

  • Netty net on Jun 16, 2011

    Very Charming thank you for sharing.

  • Hazel Crowther on Jul 1, 2011

    I like it poem or song, either way.

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