A natural perception of a plant needing fresh rain to survive.

Rain down on me

cool the earth

feed the soil

soak my leaves

stir the bees

rain

rain 

rain come to me

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Image via Wikipedia

Image via Wikipedia

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  • jimbob1 on Nov 9, 2009

    Most valuable nutrient plants have is the refreshing rain…much more wholesome than tapwater sprayed through a nozzle or sprinkler. Great little poem. A poem along the lines of necessary rain is one that I have here on Triond – The Fight. Hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed this one. Thanks.

  • Themax on Nov 10, 2009

    yes come to me rain,I l love you!!
    Beautiful poem,Thanks for sharing :)

  • giftarist on Nov 10, 2009

    Nice piece!

  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    very nice…

  • lillyrose on Nov 10, 2009

    Lovely little rain dance poem!

  • cardy on Nov 10, 2009

    Very nice work liked it!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 10, 2009

    ur talking of normal rain

    i only talk of midnight rain

    get it

    good

    rains are always welcome

    whenever

    wherever

    they come

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 11, 2009

    A nice one to read…

  • Aiyanna on Nov 11, 2009

    Simple but to the point… Sends a message that rain is the most important ingredient to make plants grow better… :) Thank you for sharing this :)

  • The Last Ogre on Nov 11, 2009

    Nice poem. Thanks.

  • live and lovin life on Nov 11, 2009

    Simplicity is the art of poetry….

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 18, 2009

    Nice imagry.

  • Pithom on Nov 19, 2009

    Ahh… a fellow rain lover… we should form the Rain Appreciation Society.

    That was a very nice write.

  • Debra on Dec 6, 2009

    Hi! I like this poem a lot. I was looking for a poem to share about rain and watering plants in the game “fairyland” (a facebook app) which is all about growing plants and spotting wildlife. Would you mind if I posted your poem there? I would reference back to this site for people to know where it came from.

  • ssaunders on Dec 6, 2009

    Hello Debra yes I will be fine with you adding it to your facebook app.

  • Debra on Dec 7, 2009

    Thanks!

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