Poem: She Came in Like a Wreaking Ball

ssaunders on Nov 8, 2009

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The feeling of a someone coming into your relationship and ruining everything.

She came in like a wreaking ball

you swept me away

and told me to stay there

for I was in the way

you say I over reacted

as she sat and stayed

I lay in the rubble from

what my heart

was

what it’s no longer

for she came in like a wreaking ball

and threw me away

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cardy on Nov 8, 2009
Very well put liked it thanks for the share!
Annashank on Nov 8, 2009
Very nicely described!!!!
jimbob1 on Nov 8, 2009
A well-expressed, heartbreaker of a poem
Edit…
“wreaking ball…” should be “wrecking ball…” (three times…)
“what my was…” something missing here “My what?”
” through me away…” s/b ” threw me away…”
Themax on Nov 9, 2009
wonderful poem,Thanks for sharing
giftarist on Nov 9, 2009
Great piece, poignant!
TroostAvenue on Nov 18, 2009
I liked the back and fourth construction.

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