Comments on: Poem: She Came in Like a Wreaking Ball

By: TroostAvenue

TroostAvenue — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 12:53:43 +0000

I liked the back and fourth construction.

By: giftarist

giftarist — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 12:38:00 +0000

Great piece, poignant!

By: Themax

Themax — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 12:27:49 +0000

wonderful poem,Thanks for sharing

By: jimbob1

jimbob1 — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 18:48:56 +0000

A well-expressed, heartbreaker of a poem
Edit…
“wreaking ball…” should be “wrecking ball…” (three times…)
“what my was…” something missing here “My what?”
” through me away…” s/b ” threw me away…”

By: Annashank

Annashank — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 18:39:15 +0000

Very nicely described!!!!

By: cardy

cardy — Sun, 08 Nov 2009 15:15:04 +0000

Very well put liked it thanks for the share!