Poem: The Little Things

ssaunders on Nov 21, 2009

Tags: Arguements, fights, Life, love, pain

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The silly fights that happen.

Oh how we fight

about the little things that come to be,

how

we fight during the day and we fight all night

how

we tend to fight

about the little things

and

the no things and the things that matter least

still

the pain is real and the pain is big

oh how we fight

about the little things that come to be.

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jimbob1 on Nov 21, 2009
It is often hard to comprehend, but it is the little foxes…the little things that become the greatest obstacles in a budding and maturing, and even a mature, relationship. This is a very revealing write. Great work. Thanks.
Dame Barbara on Nov 21, 2009
This is so true. Most fights are about the least of things.

Dame Barbara
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 22, 2009
it all is a sign of teens 17 till 19teen
TroostAvenue on Nov 22, 2009
Nice thinking. I did find the short lines to be a bit distracting though. I read it several times and couldn’t get it to flow quite right in my head.
The Last Ogre on Nov 22, 2009
Very nice.
Themax on Nov 22, 2009
very good
Hansika on Nov 24, 2009
nice one…thanks for the share

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