Poem: Twenty-four

ssaunders on Nov 18, 2009

Have you ever missed a love one and wanted nothing more than for their return to your arms?

The days that have passed

are long,

the nights are sweet

but

I am becoming impatient

and I’m

losing the will to wait!

Wont you ever come?

Tis it true?

Will you be here?

Either I am dreaming or it truly is

Nearer to

The day that I get to be with

You, my sweet…

Forever it does seem since I was there,

Often I think of

Ur beautiful face and your

Really sweet heart

and remember the nights we

laid out and watched the

stars in

your backyard

Oh how i yearn

for those days

to return.

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jimbob1 on Nov 18, 2009
I’m running out of things to say, other than I am enjoying your public messages of yearning love.
Edit… (minor)
“nothing more then for their…” from your introduction “then” s/b “than”
Thanks
Rinks Desai on Nov 19, 2009
nice one
Themax on Nov 19, 2009
very nice thank you
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 19, 2009
Soon this will pass

The wait at last

When you are in his arms

Bells will ring

All of us will sing

We all will clap

When you give him your ring

As you kiss him on his lips

Bravo you are a lovely girl

That’s all I wish to say

I wish I was born
Many miles and years
So to say
In time’s gone away
lillyrose on Nov 19, 2009
beautiful romantic poem.

Hi there!