Hi.

Hey friends, here comes another volume

Poem with words to live by, for sharing

If you agree with me, I thank thee

Else, it’s okay, thanks for listening

Each of us have one or more of own beauty

But we can’t see them, that’s strange

Yet we can see clearly the flaws of others

The beauty we have, have gone to drain

I must have the courage to go through any difficulty

Avoiding it, difficulty will still be hanging around

Once I go through it, it will be gone once and for all

Help I may need from people, hope won’t be turned down

We should take time to have some laugh

For laughter is the soothing music of our soul

Our mind need to soothe each single day

Even how hard and tiring a day may go

Thanks for reading till this point

I thank thee again for your support

I am not an expert in giving advice

But I just share with you my thoughts

my recent post :

http://purpleslinky.com/humor/the-funny-dialogues-part-29/

my earlier versions :

http://authspot.com/poetry/poem-with-words-to-live-by-volume-three/

http://authspot.com/poetry/poem-with-words-to-live-by-volume-two/

http://authspot.com/poetry/poem-with-words-to-live-by-2/

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  • Goodselfme on Dec 16, 2010

    Beautifully shared piece with heart and caring.

  • CA Johnson on Dec 16, 2010

    These are very beautiful words to live by. Thank you so much for sharing.

  • PRIYADARSHINI on Dec 16, 2010

    good poem

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 16, 2010

    Fresh poem.

  • LCM Linda on Dec 16, 2010

    Beautiful sharing. Well-said. It’s good to start my day with your words. :D

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Dec 16, 2010

    I want more!

  • papaleng on Dec 17, 2010

    you are not only full of humor but with wisdom too. As Jimmy had stated.. keep them coming, my friend.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Dec 17, 2010

    Amazing words. I’m mostly impressed when the master is speaking. Excellently expressed shifu StarP.:)

  • Brewed Coffee on Dec 17, 2010

    I like your humorous side…but I just love this sensitive side of you that never fails to touch the heart. You are one good friend who lives in the computer :-)

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 17, 2010

    Thank you for sharing these positive thoughts with us as always our Star.

  • J M Lennox on Dec 17, 2010

    That was lovely Star. There is nothing better then – straight from the heart!

  • Videomark on Dec 17, 2010

    It is important what is on the inside. Very nice poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 17, 2010

    A beautiful poem. I too advise laughter and determination.
    I always enjoy your work, Star.

    Christine

  • Suni51 on Dec 17, 2010

    Nice job, I love that.

  • Francois Hagnere on Dec 17, 2010

    Great poem and so beautifully presented. Thank you.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Dec 18, 2010

    Really too good…waiting for more volumes to come. I loved the first image.

  • yes me on Dec 18, 2010

    Like this very much cheers

  • wonder on Dec 19, 2010

    The third stanza applies to me at present.

  • gaby7 on Dec 20, 2010

    Well crafted poem! beautiful to read, I plan to live by these priceless words!

  • UncleSammy on Dec 22, 2010

    Nice share

  • vb545323 on Dec 22, 2010

    Great Work!

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 2, 2011

    Some great thoughts here. I love the last pic too coz I also love my PC that my friends live in it lol

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