When someone realizes the realities of the world after being get fall in love then it happens that a time comes when everything founds to be nothing in front of one.at that time this feelings become so passionate that one will have to feel the other side of the world .at that crucial time it becomes obvious to someone that right to live has been taken by someone else and thats love,my poems are showing a hard picture of love,romance and sadness.

” A BROKEN HEART POEM” 

A broken heart is another girl dead,

No soul inside, not beating dread,

No tears to cry, or memories to weep,

Blood the flows so steep,

No presents to keep,

Blazing red they are,

Fire burning holes through them,

Flying as ash afar,

Until hearts are drowned in venom,

And bloody red,

A knife through a heart is nothing compared,

To the pain as they tread,

On our hearts, never fair.


MY TRAVELLING THROUGH YOUR SOUL

                    IF I BEGIN TO COME IN YOUR DREAMS,

                 I WILL LOOSE EVERYTHING JUST MAKE THIS FEEL,

That I am yours more than myself its deed,

So stop making me cold like cream,

I am like a butterflywhich has no treat,

But want to be with flower which is always his feed,

                      IF I BEGIN TO COME IN YOUR DREAMS,

                 I WILL LOOSE EVERYTHING JUST MAKE THIS FEEL,

That I may not be the prince which you may need,

But I will love you most that is the mean,

That things may be wrong which you lost to seen,

But definitely I am right although it does not look and feel,

                        IF I BEGIN TO COME IN YOUR DREAMS,

                 I WILL LOOSE EVERYTHING JUST MAKE THIS FEEL,

You may have doors closed after long time of heal,

But I will crush that with my love water of sea,


Just remain myself in you that’s biggest wish I ever feel,

So that I can feel your soul and make myself relieved,

That I was yours and remain yours till love exit and feel,    

 

                              IF I BEGIN TO COME IN YOUR DREAMS,

                 I WILL LOOSE EVERYTHING JUST MAKE THIS FEEL,

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  • duck01 on Mar 21, 2011

    Very intense.

  • roxxyboi on Mar 21, 2011

    thanx alot duck01 u will see in future my poetry going more intense as love is more intense than anythingelse

  • megamatt09 on Mar 21, 2011

    Great work, really touching on some powerful emotions.

  • roxxyboi on Mar 21, 2011

    thanx megamatt09 yes love is a name of emotions

  • Dreamy777 on Mar 21, 2011

    great poem

  • Oversoul on Mar 21, 2011

    Beautifully written poem…interestingly, we seem to have the same style…could it be that you’re my brother from another mother…lol…Good job. By the way, thanks for being my fan. Support me, and I will reciprocate. Peace be unto you–even as we speak.

  • Stella on Mar 21, 2011

    so amazing. i’ve fallen in love wid ur poetry :)
    gr8 work dear.

  • roxxyboi on Mar 25, 2011

    thanx dreamy777 and stella so nice ov u

  • billi on Mar 27, 2011

    :D

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