There are lots of poetic forms, some long, some short, some serious, some funny.

One form I like to try my hand at sometimes is the limerick. The limerick is a poem of 5 lines, with a particular rhyming scheme. The first, second and last (fifth) lines all rhyme with each other (last word of each line). The third and fourth lines rhyme with each other (again, last word of each line).

This poetic form is usually meant to be funny, and often gets a bit (or a lot) rude! It is usually written about a person, perhaps using that person’s name as the rhyming word in the first line.

The other important thing about the limerick is the number of stresses or beats in each line. In the first, second and fifth lines there should be three beats per line, in the third and fourth lines there should be two beats per line.

If that’s getting confusing for you, read my limerick here about Fred, who is now a happy chappy! Read it and get and understanding of the beats and rhymes.

There’s a guy I know called Fred,

says he wishes he was dead.

Then he got a new blonde

of whom he’s quite fond,

now he’s enjoying himself instead!

If you enjoyed this little poem, why not have a go at writing one yourself – you might be able to win yourself a great prize, if you get in quick! Check out the details by clicking this link:-

http://bookstove.com/poetry/limerick-second-free-competition-closes-on-12th-april-2011/

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  • Razorwind on Feb 12, 2011

    Ha, I’ve never writen a poem like that before but I will remember limericks.

  • Carolyn Cordon on Feb 12, 2011

    I hope you’ll have a go at the competition Razorwind!

  • Murray Alfredson on Feb 12, 2011

    Not quite sure of that limerick, Carolyn.

    Apart from a) lack of an extra weak stress in line two, b) and the indicative, ‘was’ instead of the subjunctive, ‘were’ to express the provisional nature of a wish, there is a seemingly unwanted tone of auto-eroticism in the final line. Surely he should be enjoying the lady.,

  • Carolyn Cordon on Feb 13, 2011

    I bow, as always, to your superior knowledge Murray. Now I have read your words, and re-read my limerick, I can see ways to make the poem better, but I am OK with leaving it as it is, and leaving your comments here for others to learn from.
    Thank you.

  • Calare on Feb 13, 2011

    Limericks are just about the only poetry I will read voluntarily, and I like that they have sexual content, call me dirty!
    Even with its minor ‘flaws’ I liked yours, because it works, it is funny, intuitively so. You don’t have to get all sorts of metaphors or know obscure verbiage to understand it and laugh.

    Thanks for the chuckle, Carolyn.

  • eyesofblue18 on Feb 28, 2011

    A limerick…maybe I will try that! I’ve never been much of a poetry writer, but I think it’s worth a challenge. Very interesting!

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