Photography By Sourav RC.

Golden hue of an immortal sun
Flying clouds on the canvas of sky
Birds fly in the freedom of fun
A treat to watch – a gift to eye
 
Green grass, covered by morning dew
Trees dance in tune of naughty breeze
A smiling rose does all delight renew
Quiet moist earth is at absolute ease
 

A perfect scenario for two lovers young
As nature creates a soft romantic stage
Lost in each other – emotionally clung
Slowly they break the lawful cage
 

All the earth and air, beauty so profound
Awaken the soul of a poet hidden in deep
Now I can feel the aura, hear the sound
My spirit awakens from the defiant sleep.

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  • ken bultman on Sep 29, 2009

    Good poetry…nice imagery…like I’m there (but not watching).

  • LoveDoctor on Sep 29, 2009

    Great work. I love the imagery.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 29, 2009

    Beautiful words. So well written.

    Christine

  • Shamanz on Sep 29, 2009

    Love the poem, you certainly have a way with words. WHere’s the photo? lol

  • Rump on Sep 29, 2009

    Wow. I never thought you were a good poet. Congratulations on this!

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 29, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • ashan1614 on Sep 29, 2009

    This is lovely, Sourav. As Ken said, it’s almost like I’m there – or at least want to be there with someone special. :)

  • Mythili Kannan on Sep 29, 2009

    Good Imagination

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 29, 2009

    How I wish someone could say
    Such lovely words for me
    I am a lonely messenger
    How cans anyone else
    Have such love for me/

    You are the cynosure of many eyes
    So many love the abstract
    The eyes I see are yours
    The bench I observe is drenched
    All I want to know
    For whom is it your love does flow?

    Poetry comes from the heart
    Within my soul
    There is only love apart
    Of my searching soul
    Where can I feel the breeze slap
    Upon my chilling face
    Is there anyone on this earth?
    Who would like to me
    Embrace
    Ah! Yes with grace

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Sep 29, 2009

    Beautiful poem, Sourav.

  • fragile18 on Sep 30, 2009

    i love this, really. :)

  • Mengting on Oct 6, 2009

    I love this!

  • Aldeano on Oct 6, 2009

    I simply adore this piece of work!

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