Nice job, Spells!

Excellent work, man–you developed quite the ‘perfect’ touch here.

Like your repetition and style of wording, as both make the poem flow nicely.

See you around,

-Fresh Writing

liked it… i loved the way you played with words!

a very fresh poem..good one!!

I love it!

Yes, you have a certain style when you write. It is to your credit that I remembered something I read of yours before and became naturally curious about what you recently wrote. Well, curiosity killed the cat (but curiosity brought him back)!