Poetry center : I love the birds

Radamel on Dec 25, 2007

Tags: bird poems, bird poetry, birds in literature, love the birds, loving the birds, poem about birds, poem on birds

Àbout bird love.

I love the birds
Especially the ones riding through the sky
Carrying all my feeling to my love
And bringing my love’s breath
To my hive

I love the birds
Because they see everything all my around
Everything what I can’t see
Everything what I can’t hear
Everything what I want to have

I love the birds
Especially the ones
Flying through the deeps of my soul
They know me
And everything I know

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Tuğhan KARTAL on Dec 26, 2007
Sure its good. Wish to be continiu…=)
stephen on Dec 29, 2007
BIRDS DONT KNOW YOU. THEY CANT SPEAK. BE REALISTIC WITH THIS. can you tell i dont like this crap poem.
p.s. sorry for the bad review but i really dont like it.
Hugo Kahn on Dec 30, 2007
Stick to your day job
Darlene McFarlane on Dec 30, 2007
I really like this one, especially the last stanza.

Great job.
Dave on Jan 2, 2008
Poetry takes a lot of editing and hard work, just emphasize what you want to say, your lyrics are OK , but the theme is weak and meaningless. Also there is no stress of the story, by the way what are you trying to tell in this poem, just think and emphasize it.
Peter on Jan 4, 2008
I think you have something on the inside you want to set free but you could not express it with the right words. There is room for improvement.Just keep trying you will find out it can only get better.I can help you with some classes if you allow me. peter
jess on Jan 9, 2008
i think you should improve your english skill, it seems too simple for a poem. it is not lik an essay, you should use the language effectively..
enrique on Jan 11, 2008
MY EYES!!MY EYES!! MY BEUTIFUL EYES!!!
IcyCucky on Jan 12, 2008
Simple and pretty!
nutuba on Feb 10, 2009
This is a beautiful poem.
Juancav on Feb 10, 2009
Nice bird poem.
Charlie on Feb 10, 2009
I bet if you put feelings on paper as they flowed from your heart,forgetting stanza and rhyme,beauty would explode!
Barbie` on Feb 10, 2009
Good one
home on Feb 11, 2009
Nice poem especially if you put your heart on it, then you can create a much more beautiful one.
Sister Sabbay on Feb 11, 2009
As a Christian writer, I enjoyed your piece, as it is simple yet well thought out. I enjoyed the timing which is the most significant part of a poem. Great work !

Sabbay
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Bo Russo on Feb 22, 2009
It\’s your poem,say it your way.
Bunnygotblog on May 14, 2009
this is very good,:)
Zahra on May 25, 2009
Very nice! ^__^
Radamel on Mar 25, 2010
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