A poem I basically wrote about life, from an apathetic, yet REALISTIC, point of view..
Don’t you wish that life could be just a little more interesting, just a little less dull. People say we have a soul, we have a purpose, we have a mission. But how is this so, if I just keep on wishin’. The days pass by and all I keep wondering is why. These sacks of bones and flesh are ever so pathetic, you all make me sick, this world is dead – forget it. The human race has lost all it’s hope, there’s nothing here, all we do is just cope. Cope with the lies, cope with the daily routine, your already etching your grave stone, your not free. We build and build, and never sit back. What’s the point, why are you doing all that? We only live once, we do not live twice. I don’t care what the bible says, it was made by man, not an invisible voice. Apathy is the name, and it is the worlds new favorite game. We go on and feel nothing, as our skin dries up so does our emotions. Isn’t this funny? I thought we were all filled with compassion. You grow up as a little kid thinking everyone has good in them, then you get older realizing you were force fed lies, the veil was white and pulled over your eyes, now look at the world cry as we all crash and die.
Thanks! I think. lol.
And it’s poetry 
Well written……..i like it….Keep it up.
Thanks!
Thanks Erin, means a lot
And thank you vickie ^_^
And bobie, yeah I know it’d make more dough lol. But either way, I think if I really persue it, I could make just as much if not close to it with poetry I just gotta market myself right. Thanks again though
Thanks
i absolutely LOVE your writing style and this poem is so intesnsely written. i read it several times before coenting and am going to read it again. i wanted to pick out a best verse, but the entire poem itself is at its best. thanks very much for sharing, Ashley. and all the best in your writing career.
well, i came back to re-read this. sorry, i was typing so fast last time, there are some spelling slips and it was very late at night. anyway, i LOVE the manner in which you write. it’s so original and you don’t put on any airs. it is all so believable and realistic. please keep up the great work. you’re the cherry on the cake.
…and may i wish you all the very best success in your writing career. this is a brilliant start.
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