Poetry: I Cry When..

ssaunders on Nov 8, 2009

Tags: heartbreak, Poetry, sadness, strength

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The pain that you hide from the world. The illusion of looking stronger then what you may appear.

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I cry when

I’m in the shower

I cry when

you’re asleep

for

I don’t want you

to watch me weap

I’m in pain

Yes I know

I hide it well

for

I don’t let you see

the tears that fall

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shanthu on Nov 8, 2009
excellant!!
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 8, 2009
gud one!!
Annashank on Nov 8, 2009
How true!!!! Been through this many times!!!! Thank you for sharing…
jimbob1 on Nov 8, 2009
Interesting poem. There must be a reason for shedding tears in secret…
Edit…
“your a sleep…” should be “you’re asleep…”
Themax on Nov 9, 2009
ahhh….very cute and touching poem,Thanks for sharing
sexyme on Nov 14, 2009
don’t cry my girl

the whole life we have to pass yet

lets’ smile first

and melt in our lovers’ arms

and if you have to shed tears

shed them there
TroostAvenue on Nov 18, 2009
Nicely done.

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