Poetry – Like a Leaf That is Crying

CarolineMG on Nov 20, 2011

My dear ..
Look out ..

When the sun had not moved from behind the hill
The leaves were still crying
The grass had been out of the shower
And the birds are ready to sing

But do you know ..
Leaf was crying because of what?
Because he missed the sunshine
A very in need of living things

Leaf was crying ..
Until Tears flowed in a small canal
Tears ran to find a new life
Hoping to be useful to someone

Leaf who was crying in there ..
It reminds me of my waiting
to you
Which has now become mine again ..

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Comments (19)

lapasan on Nov 20, 2011
Our waiting for someone we love is like the leaf crying because it waits for the sunshine to come.
reiny on Nov 21, 2011
sometimes miss someone need to drops more tears.. Nice poem..
CHIPMUNK on Nov 21, 2011
A special one will come soon
ittech on Nov 21, 2011
very good one
JMorgan071 on Nov 21, 2011
Very nice poem.
Dreamy777 on Nov 21, 2011
very awesome poem thanks
LadyElena on Nov 22, 2011
Such a sweet Poem. thanks
ittech on Nov 22, 2011
sweet
girishpuri on Nov 22, 2011
very deep and touching
Christine Ramsay on Nov 22, 2011
A beautiful and moving poem.
zulfikar on Nov 23, 2011
nice idea behind, thanks
wonder on Nov 23, 2011
A sweet connect with nature and emotions.
ittech on Nov 23, 2011
good one return here again
1hopefulman on Nov 23, 2011
Loved it!
quiet voice on Nov 24, 2011
,,,Very interesting read.
Socorro Lawas on Nov 24, 2011
a powerful use of personification and metaphor!
Kristie Claar on Nov 27, 2011
excellent
Vinaya says good bye on Dec 1, 2011
Crying leaf, waiting for sunshine…beautiful images!
PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 6, 2011
Aww the poor little leaf. Why was the sun so mean?

Hi there!