A short Poem on Love. Hope you enjoy!

Love

by Christervitive

Lust and love, the two see right,

Yet it is these, that we must fight.

Lust, a wanting, a supposed need,

Love A care, the saying of a creed.

One is right and other wrong.

Lust, a want, a supposed need,

The planting of Satan’s seed.

Upon your hunger will he feed, 

until he draws you to your knees.

Love, a care, the saying of a creed.

A pair of hearts in desperate need.  

A God, a man, doth say I do,

Forever will I follow you.

There is no rhyme scheme or meter to this once again. (I’m sorry, but these last couple have been informal.) Hope you enjoy! Thank you for reading!

Thank you and En Christo,

Christervitive 

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  • lightning2232 on Nov 2, 2010

    Very good!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 2, 2010

    how do u say please read my lusty poem by the way.

    How do you say?
    Lust is not a need?
    After lust only comes
    Love indeed
    As lovers are born …please do read there profile lhlhlh

  • Christervitive on Nov 2, 2010

    Lust is indeed not a need, but only a need perceived.
    Lust is a perversion of God’s love, and our love towards others. Lust is not love, but a sexual desire to have sex and see them naked. That is it. It is a base emotion that ought to be shunned. Love is what God has given us, love for each other as human beings, Love for God as our creator, and a more intimate love towards the one he has set us aside for. Lust is a Satanic perversion of God’s holy law.

  • Christervitive on Nov 2, 2010

    Lust is indeed not a need, but only a need perceived.
    Lust is a perversion of God\’s love, and our love towards others. Lust is not love, but a sexual desire to have sex and see them naked. That is it. It is a base emotion that ought to be shunned. Love is what God has given us, love for each other as human beings, Love for God as our creator, and a more intimate love towards the one he has set us aside for. Lust is a Satanic perversion of God\’s holy law.

  • Christervitive on Nov 2, 2010

    Lust is indeed not a need, but only a need perceived.
    Lust is a perversion of Gods love, and our love towards others. Lust is not love, but a sexual desire to have sex and see them naked. That is it. It is a base emotion that ought to be shunned. Love is what God has given us, love for each other as human beings, Love for God as our creator, and a more intimate love towards the one he has set us aside for. Lust is a Satanic perversion of Gods love. .

  • Christervitive on Nov 2, 2010

    Sorry, Idk why it posted twice.

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