Hmmm…

These eyes will kill me some day,
slowly, pleasantly, painfully…
they go deep, deep down in my soul
and take every piece of breath away..

STOP! can you hear me!?
NO! Don´t stop! please hear me!
Oh wow! I would kill for these eyes myself…
they are end of me, my mind and
everything calm in my soul!

I look inside, I drawn in them,
I try to wake up, get out…
but why? I ask myself…
I need your eyes, I need this pain,
I would give everything
for these eyes to be mine!

pleasure, pain, satisfaction,
that is how I´d call them!
My mind, my body, my every desire…
is for you and for your eyes only!

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Comments (7)
  • carissimi on Aug 18, 2010

    very lovely

  • L R Humphries on Aug 18, 2010

    Intense and heartfelt – my kind of writing ;-)

    Good emotion, well expressed.

  • Inxxu on Aug 18, 2010

    Thank you! It is very impressive to have such comment from you :)

  • L R Humphries on Aug 18, 2010

    No problem – you write very well….

  • Inxxu on Aug 18, 2010

    Thank you! I appreciate it a lot…

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 18, 2010

    Great poem! Straight from the heart.. keep it up. :)

  • Inxxu on Aug 19, 2010

    Thank you J. Langeneckert !

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