Just a short poem about what I saw one morning in my garden.

 

When I saw you this morning,

I got scared.

You were a small bush in my garden

Last week.

 

Now you are embracing

 My favorite linden

With your long hairy vine.

 

Viciously shaking your green almonds,

You are telling me,

“Linden is mine.”

 

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  • Tattoo3658we on Oct 6, 2010

    Good Share!

  • Ukrainian on Oct 6, 2010

    for Ajsta:
    Дякую!

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Oct 7, 2010

    Lovely.

  • Borhan on Oct 7, 2010

    Olga, good work. Keep writing. The picture is also nice.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 8, 2010

    The image is beautiful. Is this Washington D.C?

    I love the figurative language in this poem. well-done.

  • The Soul Explorer on Oct 8, 2010

    Good poem!

  • LadyElena on Oct 9, 2010

    Short and Sweet – Loved it. :)

  • R.Laws on Oct 9, 2010

    Great Post! :-)

  • richardpeeej on Oct 9, 2010

    Lovely poem Olga..you must have thought so much about these words. You have such a nice garden looks just the place to relax ;-) take care…Rich

  • Ukrainian on Oct 9, 2010

    Thank you, friends for your kind comments!

  • Ukrainian on Oct 9, 2010

    for Love Doc: No, it’s not Washington D.C., it’s Georgia.

  • mkd1788 on Oct 11, 2010

    nicely expressed..good thinking..

  • CA Johnson on Oct 11, 2010

    I really enjoyed your poem. I loved the pic that you used too.

  • zulfiqarali5 on Oct 13, 2010

    nice work ! thanks

  • jioges on Oct 14, 2010

    Very eloquent. Great job.

  • surajjangid on Oct 14, 2010

    Small, knowledgeable and intriguing.

    Keep writing
    Suraj

  • Percy on Oct 15, 2010

    Nice work.

  • webseowriters on Oct 15, 2010

    Just lovely

  • thestickman on Oct 18, 2010

    :-)

  • Stotinka5 on Oct 25, 2010

    sweet!

  • JérômeAnand on Oct 31, 2010

    short and sweet

  • adicodrean1967 on Mar 28, 2011

    great post

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