How does pollution affect our planet?

Don’t make pollution
Give some solution
We made the pollution
So its up to us
To stop pollution

Pollution is cruel
Pollution makes the world cry
We should open our eyes
And stop it right now
Don’t wait
Please don’t wait
As the ozone is “bout to burst

Save nature
Save mother Earth
Or you will end up
Just like mother Earth

Trash litters the road
Trash stinks the water
And it is not good
For “em to sting you

If gone too far,
It will be too late
It’s not a fence to be painted
You can’t cover it up
When the whole world is tainted.

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  • . on Sep 16, 2007

    Not good enuf :@

  • shaane on Sep 16, 2007

    :( sorry I’m not professional :’(

  • NZPoet on Sep 18, 2007

    Hey,
    People give opinions and that is all they are. Poetry is all about writing what you think and feel. So, well done man! Good luck.
    Ciao!

  • whipermr5 on Sep 27, 2007

    pro pro pro!

  • Sanjay on Jul 7, 2008

    It’s good, it help me lot.

  • SJD on Jul 28, 2008

    That was pretty bad I must admit. I know your no proffesional but you don’t have to be a proffesional to write a poem better than THAT! Sozzy!

  • kinjal on Sep 29, 2008

    hey it is good
    this poem help me for my project
    thank you very much

  • miley cyrus on Oct 1, 2008

    heyy
    yeah its me
    but i thought that poem was pathetic..
    you have to be a celebrity like me to do a good job
    halla bye
    YOUR ONE IN A MILLION

  • Billy-Ray Cyrus on Oct 1, 2008

    hey yal,

    Miley i thought i grounded you , your not supposed to be on the computer!!!! oh and by the way i thought that this poem was beautiful to read. peace yal,,,

  • Hannah Montana on Oct 28, 2008

    It is prety good bot doesn’t ryhmesz..
    And nah I wasn’t grounded

    See ya all

  • Miley cyrus on Nov 6, 2008

    i lik it again i cant take my ize of it

  • heer on Nov 9, 2008

    ok

  • moNiQ .. on Jan 6, 2009

    sLamat iLabiT !

  • Aftab on Jan 29, 2009

    goood job

  • Maria matus LOrdes on Feb 3, 2009

    this is a really nice poem it helped me on my poster for life skills well done tanx!!!

  • i dont like this poem on Mar 11, 2009

    that was a really bad poem no offence….i could write better one and im only 12. pls do the world a favour and dont write anymore and i noticced you were copying from another poem that i was researching

  • thanks on Mar 15, 2009

    thanks it helped on a project

  • wolfmantiger on Mar 19, 2009

    the poem had potenmtial…. but then it started. the world is ending get over it. you eco frendly people make me sik.

  • Captain Ink on Mar 30, 2009

    Nice poem u got there. Keep it up dude.

  • Zarish on Apr 6, 2009

    bad bad poem!

  • taylor swift on Apr 6, 2009

    hey
    the poem’s really nice(except it doesn’t rhyme at the end)
    :D

  • aishwarya on Apr 15, 2009

    i luved it but miley, dont listen to her it was really good

  • Jessica on Apr 22, 2009

    Heey, I think your poem could’ve done better with a few different revisions on the ending words for a better rhyme scheme. I also thought that you used the word ‘pollution’ far too much. Be creative! :) I bet you could come up with more unique and interesting ways to describe.

  • wu-hoo on Apr 25, 2009

    The last stanza was well written, but everything above it was cheesy as if it came out of a 12 year old\’s mouth. It was good you wrote one though.

  • Princess on May 26, 2009

    Hey dear thats a good poem…But hope u could write it more beautifully…….U could have made it a bit more nice by making it rhyming…………..in all it was a good job……….best of luck for more poems…….keep writing dude

  • KAUSHAL on Jun 2, 2009

    THAT WAS REALLY DEEP. THAT WAS SOMETHING WHICH LEFT ME THINKING. ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR FUTURE ART. CHEERS!!!!!!!!

  • konsaikai doshiima polishito haizamaru shikamki namestarigatou kudashi on Jun 3, 2009

    Yellow everyman.
    this poyem are very bead word.
    you say inside the poyem got bad word laik u hope the werld die.
    i dont laik the poyem,
    i also dun laik yu.
    than yo i hope my commen were hep you alot to im proof this poyem buy 1000000000. then only got alot sale . me at my country were not accept this bad poyem. please improof it so dat yu were get sales. than yo. so plis improof it!

  • zac efron on Jun 4, 2009

    i loved this poem miley! we should get together sometime to write a poem about i dont know, anything (if you catch my drift)

    -zac

  • saroj on Jun 25, 2009

    hey it is a fantastic poem &help me a lot………….

  • michelle on Jul 8, 2009

    no ways of pollution ok…….

  • robby ray on Jul 25, 2009

    useless

  • The Mask on Aug 9, 2009

    It was a good poem the only problem is no rhythm OK. All the best for next poem.

  • priyanka chopra on Aug 23, 2009

    its super .best of luck .u will be a great poet

  • Manish on Sep 14, 2009

    it’s fantastic i liked .it helped me to complete my project

  • marius on Nov 16, 2009

    yhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

  • leah on Jan 28, 2010

    i think, it’s good…… cause i copyed this and my teacher said it was good.:)

  • suzan on Feb 11, 2010

    vry bad booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

  • watitiw on Feb 22, 2010

    nice poem!

  • richa on Feb 24, 2010

    gd poem……………………………………….

  • kanika on Mar 10, 2010

    nice but very long…………………………………..

  • A girl who thought this needed to be said on Mar 21, 2010

    it isn’t all tht but u made a point u wanted to express and am sure some plp realised from this poem tht u need to stop polluting good work and keep expressing dont let anyone stop u u dont have to be a pro to make a point.

  • britny spears on Mar 28, 2010

    its a baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad poem.

  • The Truth Queen on Apr 14, 2010

    that poem was a good poem for a NURD but that poem was a suckish poem for a normal person.Hope you can find a better hobby because that one is sure to be wrong.

    A girl who thought this needed to be said on Mar 21, 2010 is jst lying to you.

    i am telling you the truth

    sorry it hurts :(

  • The Truth Queen on Apr 14, 2010

    that was a little harsh but its da truth! looooooser!

    :D :) :( ;)

  • Smiles :) on Apr 14, 2010

    :)
    I thaought that was great :0

  • rawinder (india) on Apr 29, 2010

    good keep it up0

  • dah awesomest on May 7, 2010

    yo,yo it awesome! IF YOUR A HIPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Billy-Ray Cyrus on Jun 17, 2010

    Miley cyrus can u suck my dick?

  • phenz on Jun 21, 2010

    yehhh th poem was alrightt but it didnt rhyme as much but it was good overrall and it had a good understanding

  • Abhishek on Sep 1, 2010

    it is a awesome one

  • Abhishek on Sep 1, 2010

    -hey
    plz plz plz do a favour
    don\’t write again even
    it was yuck
    plz find another job

  • shreya on Sep 10, 2010

    very good poem
    i had got a lot of help from this poem
    my teacher has praised me for this poem

  • camz on Oct 16, 2010

    mmmmmm i need a poem about water pollution :(

  • urvashi on Oct 22, 2010

    those who cant do anything comment unneccesarily on others so u dont worry it was a good poem & those who criticised it are real loooooooooooooooser

  • mohit on Oct 22, 2010

    i love urvashi

  • IM KE$HA on Dec 12, 2010

    everyone who said it was bad is a ****in *****
    nice job

    :)

  • Devina on Jan 10, 2011

    all poems are fantastic.

  • Shreyash Bhattarai on Jan 12, 2011

    I needed same kind of poem to do my homework thanx to the poet

  • eunice on Feb 18, 2011

    hmm. i was expecting more. :/
    but its alrught, although i could do kind better, im just lazy.

  • hasan on Feb 22, 2011

    it is the poem that how to slove oue problems against pollution

  • Katrina on Feb 25, 2011

    it’s nice poem but it was little boring at the end of it you must make it more nice at the end

  • Aditya on May 15, 2011

    aree yaar badi mast poem hai
    ye mujhe mere project me help karegi!

  • simran on Jun 4, 2011

    i liked it so much that iam taking it as my project. and those who said its bad then they are idiot because you tried so hard and wrote so meaningful poem that they can’t even think.very good and thank you.

  • jv on Aug 8, 2011

    i lke it because my grad was perfect 98 because of that poem .. :) ) thanks for that ! love yah..

  • jana on Aug 8, 2011

    putahness …

  • mina on Aug 8, 2011

    hmmmmmp ur so not good..yuck ewww kadiring poem..haha

    like u ! ammp and bobo u big jerk ENGLISH KARABAO.. HAHA :D :) HMMP PATHETIC HOW THERE YOU …FUCK YOU ! BOYCH LIER … :P

  • anshika on Aug 23, 2011

    gud poem but soo long i like it and it helped me in my english project

  • anjali on Aug 23, 2011

    this poem is perfect for my project
    sooo nice………..

  • HARSIMRAN KAUR on Nov 6, 2011

    THANKS, THIS HELP ME IN MY PROJECT. VERY NICE POEM!!!!

  • varsha on Nov 19, 2011

    tanks a lot it helped me in my project………….&i liked it…….

  • dffffff on Jan 8, 2012

    Faltu Bakwas…………

  • 3bo0od on Mar 3, 2012

    its very good and who told its not good m3 nfsk

  • يونا on Apr 22, 2012

    مو حلوة القصيدة مررررة

  • bianca on May 27, 2012

    imi bag pula in poiezia ta………………………………. e naspaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!

  • bianka on May 27, 2012

    am nevoie dp. un poem despre poluarea apei nu asta!!!!!!

    :(

  • mjhgfdsd on Jun 16, 2012

    its very nice

  • mjhgfdsd on Jun 16, 2012

    its very nice

  • sarry on Jan 4, 2013

    u r one in millions

  • sarvinder on Jan 4, 2013

    gh

  • rattan kaur on Jan 17, 2013

    it’s good
    helped me alot

  • rattan kaur on Jan 17, 2013

    it’s good
    helped me alot

  • rattan kaur on Jan 17, 2013

    it’s good
    helped me alot

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