Pond Leaf

Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 11, 2011

When someone is their own worst enemy.

Wondrous
Wicked

Raised bar? Now stressed and bowing
Knowing lends to disastrous gloating

Falsely depicted

Love’s water copiously still flowing

Wondering if the new dude is half as doating

Is he sensitive
attractive
intellectual,

caring capable of showing

you

what he feels, thinks wants, wishes
is he capable of loving you like I did

Still do

Longing for what we planned to be; What was

Here is the one who did, for your sake
Sincerely hoping

He does…

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lian rosa on Apr 11, 2011
“Knowing lends to disastrous gloating”—–> this thought is so true sometimes.
lian rosa on Apr 11, 2011
\”Knowing lends to disastrous gloating\”—–> this thought is so true sometimes.
lian rosa on Apr 11, 2011
\\\”Knowing lends to disastrous gloating\\\”—–> this thought is so true sometimes.
DEVIKA on Apr 11, 2011
well done on your impressive work
lian rosa on Apr 11, 2011
\\\\\\\”Knowing lends to disastrous gloating\\\\\\\”—–> this thought is so true sometimes.
Nikita Phadke on Apr 11, 2011
Nice!
webseowriters on Apr 11, 2011
very true
Ima Vee on Apr 11, 2011
wonderful piece
Edsss on Apr 11, 2011
TRUE!
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 12, 2011
Thanks !!!!
Nina Mason on Apr 12, 2011
I just love the way you write Jerry!
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 12, 2011
Thanks Nina. That is sweet!
anndavey650 on Apr 12, 2011
Always hope…
LadyElena on Apr 12, 2011
Very deep – You certainly have a way with words. Thx
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 12, 2011
Thanks Elena and Ann.
ladym33 on Apr 12, 2011
Very well expressed poem.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 15, 2011
thanks LadyM33

Hi there!