Standing on my front doorstep…

Susurrations fill the spaces
of a soft, fluorescent night.
Windless snow accumulates
to mute the ragged edges
in profiles of leafless trees.
I stand still, and wonder.

(Why this snow, this night,
should draw me to reflections
of the past, is hard to say.)

Gentle hiss from small collisions,
multitudes of flakes appear
from darkness, then pass
slowly through my vision,
bounce, and settle soft.
I stand, and wonder still.

(What is in this night, this snow,
that turns my inward lens
to images in time,
places I have seen,
and brings me home to winters
in ages lived and loved, will be
perhaps, impossible to say.)

The hum, just barely not imagined,
draws attention to a streetlamp,
refracted and expanded,
yet, in spite of the illusion
left less able to illuminate.
And still, I stand and wonder.

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  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 6, 2009

    A great piece of work

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Nov 6, 2009

    So often, I feel your poems on a visceral level–this is one of them. I cannot always describe in words what I feel–I can only say I feel the poem. It\’s like you paint a portrait, and I am standing in the middle of it, observing what you have just painted–the sights, the sounds, the smells, even the temperature. Beautiful, Casey

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Nov 6, 2009

    So often, I feel your poems on a visceral level–this is one of them. I cannot always describe in words what I feel–I can only say I feel the poem. It\\\’s like you paint a portrait, and I am standing in the middle of it, observing what you have just painted–the sights, the sounds, the smells, even the temperature. Beautiful, Casey

  • coffeeadict on Nov 6, 2009

    Brilliant. The moments where we dare to stand still and enjoy or let the atmosphere work on us, get rarer by the day, but we should take the time whenever we can.

  • Katie Marie on Nov 6, 2009

    Amazing. Loved how you allowed us to see the snow coming out of the darkness and into the illumination of the light. Something I have seen so many times. You brought both the visual and the peaceful sense of silent snowfall into this.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Nov 8, 2009

    …I should have said–standing in the middle of the portrait you just painted, and experiencing (not just observing) the sights, sounds, smells, atmosphere…

  • maranatha on Nov 11, 2009

    Yes, I agree with Katie and Roberta. This is awesome, Casey. I have felt just so on a silent winter’s night, so hushed you break the spell with the merest whisper.

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