A short poem.

My soup is getting cold but
it is a gross Lentil soup
that has its meat parts melted
into the broth so that it seems like
diarrhea.
I am not hungry. 
I will eat my poop soup
in a couple of hours maybe.

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Comments (4)
  • TroostAvenue on Nov 9, 2009

    Was that an exercise in imagery, or an attempt to disgust? Works both ways.

  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    good article

  • diamondpoet on Nov 10, 2009

    Interesting.

  • redmail99 on Nov 11, 2009

    nice

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