02.09.2010.

How can I want a portrait of perfection?
When I can’t stand my own reflection
As I look into the mirror
And pick at my complexion.

My face in public, I try to hide.
A smile on the front, but tears inside.
I look happy to most,
But to all, I’ve lied.

To what I’ve been dealt, what a hand,
But the misery inside has happiness banned.
A change is needed,
And it’s what I demand.

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  • Adam Henry Sears on Apr 5, 2010

    Hi Alysha.

    I like this one because it says some things about how our self-view is affected by others’ views of us.

    However, personal happiness should not depend on what we don’t have. It should depend on our personal outlook on life.

    Thanks for sharing.

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