A Ghost watches the examination.

The Ghost knew,

the sights,

the frights,

the lack of heart pounds,

all sounds,

the smells,

there was nothing else,

no more time,

the crime,

no matter how stark,

brutal and dark,

pale against the process

by which the murdered

are dissected and examined

to find the cause,

the ghost would pause

at the legal clause,

and the necessity

of the postmortem examination,

what frustration!

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Comments (9)
  • ceegirl on Dec 27, 2009

    nice poet.

  • jaysonv on Dec 27, 2009

    great post.. i like it very interesting..

  • Stacey Watts on Dec 27, 2009

    This was very well done as usual. I hope you are well. Your words are still amazing as always.

  • albert1jemi on Dec 28, 2009

    great words well written

  • alc on Dec 28, 2009

    Loved it! Thanks for sharing!

  • Sammy2000 on Dec 29, 2009

    another good pice of writing pa

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 29, 2009

    What a creepy experience that would be!!

  • devsir on Dec 30, 2009

    You are best at your arena of crime-fiction.

  • willie wondka on Jan 3, 2010

    the coldness of the steel bed looks cold and icy without the body, it does make you wonder if the dead do watch themslves getting cut open in the morgue.

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