…An issue.

 

 

Darkness and stillness are my friends
I am poverty and beggary is my trend
A matter of surprise but a subject not to hide
Ignorance is my mother and I am a fatherless child
Soaked in blood and covered with mud
I live in this world like a hopeless bird.
if the whole world turns like me?
A little carelessness turns out to be
Sinking deep in this dilapidated sea
I cry for a life, I cry for your mercy!

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  • Alyssa M. on Jun 26, 2011

    i feel for this poetry of yours!

  • isloooboy on Jun 26, 2011

    aaaah so painful but amazing thoughts very nice work. I just want to say, Share your wealth with those who are around you and don’t ask for any help but they are the most needed ones. Just do favor to them without showing any expressions of pettiness

  • Borhan on Jun 26, 2011

    Nice one.

  • sambasivarao on Jun 26, 2011

    Yes. Poverty has to be eradicate from this world. Good share.

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 27, 2011

    very good, poverty has many flavors.

  • Dennis N OBrien on Jun 28, 2011

    A heartfelt poem, very good.

  • Steven West on Jul 22, 2011

    Powerfully written poem. Well done.

  • yeasin on Jul 23, 2011

    very well-thought poem indeed

  • tonyleather on Jul 23, 2011

    Quite staggeringly descriptive.

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 29, 2011

    powerful words

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