They say the pen is mightier than the sword. This may be true, but I don’t generally use my pen for battle. Rather I use the power of my pen to (hopefully) help others gain some valuable life lessons without having to learn them the hard way as I have.

Painful moments, trying times

Paychecks that amount to dimes

Why bother to submit my rhymes?

Because they heal my brother

Striving just to be a vessel

Mixing a balm, my pen a pestle

A warm safe place in which to nestle

Should we not comfort each other?

And not for monetary gain

To some this idea seems insane

Before the world my life I’ve lain

In black and white, these pages

Confirm the power of the pen

Can help us to begin again

To see where someone else has been

Share wisdom of the ages

So still I will hasten to write

From my pen release the might

That flows from its tip and into sight

And before all bares my soul

That you may know what I have known

Glean the experiences I’ve sown

My joys and sorrows become your own

Without having paid my toll

  

 

©2011 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • PartizAnka on Jul 27, 2011

    Surely pen has a might power. You just now proved it. Very nice poem!

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 27, 2011

    Brilliant!

  • ashan1614 on Jul 27, 2011

    PartizAnka – the pen indeed has power that we don’t recognize.

    Love Doc – thanks as always for your support!

  • neopisiva on Jul 27, 2011

    Pen has power, but they say picture has even more, as it speaks more than thousand words…
    Good share!

  • mphsglo on Jul 27, 2011

    Very very nice. Thanks for the share.

  • Oversoul on Jul 27, 2011

    I love this, beloved. I can see myself writing something like this. Good job. Peace be unto you–even as we speak.

  • MINISTER MARLENE SISTA REAL on Jul 27, 2011

    Money get’s things dirty. When we clean ourselves up from it, we are free to love divinely!

    Mixing a balm my pen a pestle….Ashan I just love these six word’s. I’m shaking my head right now. Don’t know how to feel…..Awesome!

  • foxpete88 on Jul 27, 2011

    very nice, thanks for share.-

  • Poeta Nascitur Non Fit on Jul 28, 2011

    This reads like a rap. Great meter and rhyme scheme.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jul 28, 2011

    That is such a good poem. I love the rhyming pattern and the message it delivers.

  • Freethinking on Jul 28, 2011

    Well written my friend, yet I’m afraid some people still need to feel their way through the ups and downs of life, regardless of the advice we give them.

  • profreelancer on Jul 28, 2011

    Very nice express the power of pen…………awesome writing….

  • CA Johnson on Jul 28, 2011

    This is a great poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • LadyElena on Jul 29, 2011

    Deep and Inspiring. Thanks so much.

  • olea33 on Jul 29, 2011

    Wow!

  • Dennis N OBrien on Aug 9, 2011

    Well done, you have plenty of power with the pen.

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